Richard is Retired — or not

Our Own “Above Pate Valley”

March 22, 2007 · 1 Comment

 Like Gary Snyder, we traveled to a mountain top by following our own trail.  But no obsidian, no connection with summer residents from 10,000 years ago.  But his mountain looks like ours.  And Marian had mountain trout for dinner tonight.

Above Pate Valley

We finished clearing the last

Section of trail by noon,

High on the ridge-side

Two thousand feet above the creek

Reached the pass, went on

Beyond the white pine groves,

Granite shoulders, to a small

Green meadow watered by the snow,

Edged with Aspen—sun

Straight high and blazing

But the air was cool.

Ate a cold fried trout in the

Trembling shadows. I spied

A glitter, and found a flake

Black volcanic glass—obsidian—

By a flower. Hands and knees

Pushing the Bear grass, thousands

Of arrowhead leavings over a

Hundred yards. Not one good

Head, just razor flakes

On a hill snowed all but summer,

A land of fat summer deer,

They came to camp. On their

Own trails. I followed my own

Trail here. Picked up the cold-drill,

Pick, singlejack, and sack

Of dynamite.

Ten thousand years.

 

—Gary Snyder, Riprap and Cold Mountain Poems

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